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Being close
He buried his face in her hair.
Smelling the salt on her skin. Feeling at home right there. Bursting, with joy from within. Closeness of spirit and kin. Closeness so real, but so rare. Allowing his senses to spin. Perceiving that life can be fair. Alive, and acutely aware. Larry Reborn © 2004 Larry Reborn (Listed under: LoveWedding, ) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted!   (391 votes, average 3,91)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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