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More Like He
God loves us in the
Most unusual way. Even when we sin, He forgives us each day. I can't understand, How much more caring he is. So quick to forgive us, For all the bad things that we did. If only you and I could be more like him. Towards our fellow brothers and sisters, A better world we live in. Much happier now, living in peace. What a difference it would make, If We Where More Like He. Vanessa Michelle Pattie © 2004 Vanessa Michelle Pattie (Listed under: Religous) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (98 votes, average 3,25)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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