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More Like He
God loves us in the
Most unusual way.
Even when we sin,
He forgives us each day.
I can't understand,
How much more caring he is.
So quick to forgive us,
For all the bad things that we did.
If only you and I could be more like him.
Towards our fellow brothers and sisters,
A better world we live in.
Much happier now, living in peace.
What a difference it would make,
If We Where More Like He.


Vanessa Michelle Pattie

© 2004 Vanessa Michelle Pattie
(Listed under: Religous)



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