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Colour of feelings
Black is black and white is white and colours in between
What's the colour of our love if red should mean just mean Yellow hatred fills the fields that used to be green Hurry up and paint my feelings so they can be seen Cocktail parties every night and dancing on the floor Sky is getting darker now but I won't miss the show Blue's the sky and blue my heart and blue the way to go Suddenly I look around and everything is blue Larry Reborn © 2004 Larry Reborn (Listed under: Lyrics) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (92 votes, average 3,82)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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