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Progress
is a journey away from here The aim diffused unspoken With one hand on the tiller the deep streams feel like long lost thoughts Unborn by me moving in another sphere sweeping along on thousand feet just a touch in my hand Jerker Swande © 2004 Jerker Swande (Listed under: SocialComfort, ) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted!   (149 votes, average 3,71)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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