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Improbable love
To see you is to love you
is an antiquated phrase. I don't know if it's true though I know I long for such embrace, love born within a magic gaze, eternal bliss without regret, an endless ocean of apprais, to make me happily forget, the fact we haven't met. Larry Reborn © 2004 Larry Reborn (Listed under: Humour & LoveComfort, ) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted!   (171 votes, average 3,81)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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