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All Who Follow Him
Hell burns with fire.
It's there for you Because of Satan the liar. Hell welcomes; all who dwells with him Hell loves; the wicked ones Hell seeks; all who's greedy And weak Hell believes; in all who deceives Hell wins; when you follow him Hell desires; for more to burn With his fire Hell needs; like him, More of us to be Hell gives; to sinners who live Hell hates; those who in God Still have faith Hell takes in; All who follow him and Fire he'll pour upon them!!! Vanessa Michelle Pattie © 2004 Vanessa Michelle Pattie (Listed under: Religous) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (111 votes, average 3,51)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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