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Lingering hopes
My hopes kept lingering the air
of yet untrodden hill and field I started out to see what there the newborn future'd yield. I did discover in surprise, that destiny's not by the dice, to change its tidal turn hard lessons one must learn. Expectantly I looked upon those hopes that just kept ling'ring on I wanted them to travel high and let me hitchhike to the sky. Then in a flash I saw as true, which energy would make them go, that it was I who put them there and thus can take them anywhere. Larry Reborn © 2004 Larry Reborn (Listed under: PhilosophicComfort, ) TIP: You can doubleclick any word with the left mouse button, to get its definition. Your vote has been counted! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (128 votes, average 3,73)Please consider the following when voting Sound values: Such as alliteration and rhyme. Rhythm: The effective use of line lengths and beat (including meter, but also including free verse lines). Imagery: The use of images to express and convey meaning and to create the mood and shape of the poem. Diction: Choice of words, figures of speech, syntactical patterns. Line groups: Stanzas in traditional forms, verse paragraphs in free verse. |
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